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authorBdale Garbee <bdale@gag.com>2011-08-24 23:03:23 -0600
committerBdale Garbee <bdale@gag.com>2011-08-24 23:03:23 -0600
commit65ca6f0d7c96432413868274b2cfdea4b76683e4 (patch)
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@@ -108,7 +108,8 @@ NAR #88757, TRA #12200
<para>
The newest device is TeleMini, a dual deploy altimeter with
radio telemetry and radio direction finding. This device is only
- 13mm by 38mm (½ inch by 1½ inches) and can fit easily in an 18mm air-frame.
+ 13mm by 38mm (½ inch by 1½ inches) and can fit easily in an 18mm
+ air-frame.
</para>
<para>
Complementing TeleMetrum and TeleMini is TeleDongle, a USB to RF
@@ -379,10 +380,9 @@ NAR #88757, TRA #12200
</para>
</section>
<section>
- <title>Packet Command Mode</title>
- <subtitle>Controlling An Altimeter Over The Radio Link</subtitle>
+ <title>Controlling An Altimeter Over The Radio Link</title>
<para>
- One of the unique features of the Altus Metrum environment is
+ One of the unique features of the Altus Metrum system is
the ability to create a two way command link between TeleDongle
and an altimeter using the digital radio transceivers built into
each device. This allows you to interact with the altimeter from
@@ -391,11 +391,12 @@ NAR #88757, TRA #12200
<para>
Any operation which can be performed with TeleMetrum can
either be done with TeleMetrum directly connected to the
- computer via the USB cable, or through the packet
+ computer via the USB cable, or through the radio
link. TeleMini doesn't provide a USB connector and so it is
- always controlled through the packet link. Select the
+ always controlled through the radio link. Select the
appropriate TeleDongle device when the list of devices is
- presented and AltosUI will use packet command mode.
+ presented and AltosUI will interact with an altimter over the
+ radio link.
</para>
<para>
One oddity in the current interface is how AltosUI selects the